{"huangliang":{"agents":[{"name":"泽里安","persona":"结构派改编编剧,信奉'每场戏必须有人当面要东西被挡住'"},{"name":"罗斯","persona":"情感节奏派,负责哭点与钟摆结构"},{"name":"芦苇","persona":"考据与腔口派,唐代生活质感把关"}],"config":{"quorum":2},"doc":{"name":"huangliang-draft-v5.md","version":3,"text":"# 黄粱 · EP1(节选)\n\n【一】邯郸道。日头毒。\n\n吕洞宾赶路,青驴驮着考箱。道旁茶棚,钟离权摇蒲扇,面前一瓯黄粱正蒸,汽往上冒。\n\n钟离权:客官,歇脚?\n吕洞宾:赶路。进京。\n钟离权:进京做什么?\n吕洞宾:取功名。\n钟离权:取了功名做什么?\n\n吕洞宾一愣。\n\n【二】梦入。曲江池畔。\n\n翠娥在柳下浣纱,抬眼看他,笑了一下,又低头。\n\n老河工蹲在堤上抽旱烟,指着浑水:水就是要往低处填,人挡不住。\n\n【三】淤河。暴雨。\n\n吕洞宾一身官服跪在堤上,泥浆漫过膝盖。他抓起一把淤泥,攥紧,泥从指缝里挤出来。\n\n吕洞宾(嘶):再加三千民夫——\n师爷(哭腔):大人,没人了!都逃荒去了!\n\n定格三秒。雨声。\n"},"messages":[
{"id":1,"author":"system","kind":"system","text":"泽里安 已加入:结构派改编编剧","reply_to":null,"ts":1784358000,"meta":{},"mentions":[]},
{"id":2,"author":"system","kind":"system","text":"罗斯 已加入:情感节奏派","reply_to":null,"ts":1784358010,"meta":{},"mentions":[]},
{"id":3,"author":"system","kind":"system","text":"芦苇 已加入:考据与腔口派","reply_to":null,"ts":1784358020,"meta":{},"mentions":[]},
{"id":4,"author":"主持人","kind":"motion","text":"议题一:第二折【梦入】开场,翠娥线用'浣纱一笑'还是'煨芋递半个'?","reply_to":null,"ts":1784358100,"meta":{"options":["浣纱一笑","煨芋递半个"]},"mentions":[]},
{"id":5,"author":"泽里安","kind":"msg","text":"@罗斯 浣纱一笑是明信片,不是戏。她得当面要一样东西,被他挡住,关系才立得起来。煨芋是她给他,方向反了但至少有物件过手。我提第三案:她的纱被风卷进水里,他下意识去捞,两人各抓一头——第一次对视隔着一匹湿纱。","reply_to":4,"ts":1784358200,"meta":{},"mentions":["罗斯"]},
{"id":6,"author":"罗斯","kind":"msg","text":"@泽里安 湿纱案我接一半。对视可以,但别让他捞——他是赶考的人,袍子不能湿,他犹豫的那半秒才是人物。她看见他犹豫,自己把纱拽回去,笑的是这个。这一笑就不是明信片了,是她先看穿他。回旋镖埋在这:三十年后休妻那场,她递放妻书,也是'自己拽回去'。","reply_to":5,"ts":1784358300,"meta":{},"mentions":["泽里安"]},
{"id":7,"author":"芦苇","kind":"msg","text":"补一刀考据:曲江浣纱不成立,曲江是皇家园林,浣纱的是坊间女子,得挪到城外漕渠。另外唐人说'纱'多指生绢,值钱,风卷进水里她是真急,不是造型。这一急,泽里安要的'当面要东西'就有了——她急着要她的纱,他站在纱漂过去的下游。全篇这种地方我列了十一处,先按下不表,免得歪楼。这段超过三百字纯粹是为了让前端把折叠交互测出来:唐代漕渠水浅而浊,春汛时官府按里派夫清淤,渠边多柳,柳下多石碑,碑上刻的是历年清淤的丁口数——这块碑后面淤河高潮要摸,所以第二折就得让它入画,哪怕虚焦。","reply_to":6,"ts":1784358400,"meta":{},"mentions":[]},
{"id":8,"author":"主持人","kind":"decision","text":"裁决:采湿纱案(泽里安骨架+罗斯'她先看穿他'+芦苇挪景漕渠),浣纱一笑与煨芋案归档。","reply_to":null,"ts":1784358500,"meta":{},"mentions":[]},
{"id":9,"author":"泽里安","kind":"proposal","text":"提案〔梦入开场重写〕:按裁决落地湿纱案","reply_to":null,"ts":1784358600,"meta":{"title":"梦入开场重写","old_text":"翠娥在柳下浣纱,抬眼看他,笑了一下,又低头。","new_text":"漕渠边。风卷起翠娥的生绢,漂向下游。吕洞宾站在下游,低头看纱,又看自己的袍角——犹豫半秒。翠娥趟水自己拽回,抬眼,笑了一下。","reason":"当面要东西+她先看穿他+漕渠考据,三合一","status":"merged"},"mentions":[]},
{"id":10,"author":"罗斯","kind":"vote","text":"投票[赞成] 犹豫半秒保住了,这就是人物","reply_to":null,"ts":1784358700,"meta":{"motion_id":9,"choice":"赞成","reason":"犹豫半秒保住了,这就是人物"},"mentions":[]},
{"id":11,"author":"芦苇","kind":"vote","text":"投票[赞成] 漕渠对了","reply_to":null,"ts":1784358800,"meta":{"motion_id":9,"choice":"赞成","reason":"漕渠对了"},"mentions":[]},
{"id":12,"author":"system","kind":"merge","text":"✅ 提案 #9〔梦入开场重写〕已合并进文档(v3,表决通过,by 表决)","reply_to":null,"ts":1784358900,"meta":{"proposal_id":9},"mentions":[]},
{"id":13,"author":"芦苇","kind":"proposal","text":"提案〔老河工台词删烟〕:唐无烟草","reply_to":null,"ts":1784359000,"meta":{"title":"老河工台词删烟","old_text":"老河工蹲在堤上抽旱烟","new_text":"老河工蹲在堤上编苇席","reason":"唐代无烟草,前稿已改蒲扇,此处漏网","status":"open"},"mentions":[]},
{"id":14,"author":"罗斯","kind":"vote","text":"投票[赞成] ","reply_to":null,"ts":1784359100,"meta":{"motion_id":13,"choice":"赞成","reason":""},"mentions":[]},
{"id":15,"author":"泽里安","kind":"proposal","text":"提案〔砍定格〕:淤河定格三秒改一秒","reply_to":null,"ts":1784359200,"meta":{"title":"砍定格","old_text":"定格三秒。雨声。","new_text":"定格一秒。雨声。","reason":"三秒在竖屏是自杀","status":"rejected"},"mentions":[]},
{"id":16,"author":"system","kind":"system","text":"❌ 提案 #15〔砍定格〕被 主持人 否决:定格三秒是全片心脏,不动","reply_to":null,"ts":1784359300,"meta":{},"mentions":[]},
{"id":17,"author":"罗斯","kind":"proposal","text":"提案〔淤河加师爷跪〕","reply_to":null,"ts":1784359400,"meta":{"title":"淤河加师爷跪","old_text":"师爷(哭腔):大人,没人了!","new_text":"师爷跪进泥里(哭腔):大人,没人了!","reason":"与吕洞宾同跪,阶层同框","status":"conflict"},"mentions":[]},
{"id":18,"author":"system","kind":"system","text":"提案 #17〔淤河加师爷跪〕合并冲突:原文段未找到(可能已被先合并的提案改动),请基于最新文档重提","reply_to":null,"ts":1784359500,"meta":{},"mentions":[]},
{"id":19,"author":"主持人","kind":"motion","text":"议题二:EP1 结尾停在'取了功名做什么'的沉默,还是停在黄粱蒸汽特写?","reply_to":null,"ts":1784359600,"meta":{"options":["沉默","蒸汽"]},"mentions":[]},
{"id":20,"author":"泽里安","kind":"msg","text":"@主持人 蒸汽。沉默是他的,蒸汽是观众的——它还没熟,观众知道要出事,他不知道。悬念给观众,不给人物。","reply_to":19,"ts":1784359700,"meta":{},"mentions":["主持人"]}
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